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Form Rejection Letters

May 8, 2012 //  by Wendy Lawton//  91 Comments

Blogger: Wendy Lawton

A few weeks ago I wrote a blog about interpreting rejection letters and confusing feedback. You can find that blog here.

I was a writer long before I became an agent. It’s one of the reasons I understand the angst of trying to get published. While poking around in old files on my computer, I came across this little piece I wrote thirteen years ago about rejection letters. I figured you’d understand . . .

——————–

Having been the recipient of many an editorial rejection letter, I pretty much consider myself an expert on the genre.  My juvenile fiction series sold early this year, leaving me in the enviable position of having to pen several rejection letters of my own. Only another writer can fully appreciate the satisfaction I experienced in drafting the following letter, withdrawing my proposal from simultaneous consideration at three other publishers:

Dear [Publisher];

Another fine CBA publisher is interested in acquiring the series that you’ve been considering for [umpteen] months. When submitting my proposal simultaneously, I promised to keep you posted when and if other publishers expressed interest.

I appreciate the time you’ve taken to consider this proposal.  I wish I could be more encouraging, but I have limited writing resources and must decline any interest you may still have in this proposal.

Please allow me to encourage you. You have a solid publishing house, and this rejection in no way reflects on that fact. I do hope you’ll continue to consider other writers in the future.

Sincerely,

Wendy Lawton

No, I didn’t actually send it, but I certainly relished writing it.  As you collect those sometimes too-frequent rejection letters, be sure to study them carefully.  In time, you may be called upon to write your own.

——————–

So, just for fun, I’d love to see the form rejection letter you long to pen to an agent or editor. Hopefully you’re feeling especially creative. I’ll pick the best and send some great books to the winner.

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  1. Tiana Smith

    May 8, 2012 at 5:23 am

    Ha ha, that’s great! It’s too early for my creative juices to be flowing, but I’ll try to come back later with a rejection letter of my own 🙂

    Reply
  2. Joanne Sher

    May 8, 2012 at 5:55 am

    WWAAYYY too fun!!

    Reply
    • Mary Curry

      May 8, 2012 at 6:40 am

      Ohhhh! Love this, Wendy. Just reading yours gave such satisfaction. I’ll have to give some thought to composing one of my own – a task to savor.

      Reply
  3. Lindsay Harrel

    May 8, 2012 at 6:58 am

    LOL, sounds fun. I’m looking forward to reading everyone’s responses!

    Reply
  4. Jeanne

    May 8, 2012 at 7:29 am

    I’m in. I’ll draft one and be back later. 🙂

    Reply
  5. Jennifer Major

    May 8, 2012 at 7:39 am

    same here.

    Reply
  6. Bill Giovannetti

    May 8, 2012 at 7:44 am

    Dear Sir or Madam,

    Thank you for your eleven-month perusal of my proposal, Armpit Melodies: Front Porch Singin’ for Backwater Livin’. I cannot imagine the time and effort you’ve put into tracking the digital file for so long and preparing the French press in advance of your many editorial meetings — not to mention satisfying all the fussy tea-drinkers on your team. I am so grateful for the care and effort you’ve invested allowing my rejection letter to marinate for almost a year before deciding not to say anything at all. That had to be tough.

    That’s what makes a letter like this so hard.

    I must withdraw my offer to let you publish my book. Steven Spielberg has purchased exclusive rights and is planning not only a major motion picture, but a theme park. I apparently caught the wave of the Armpit craze. Lucky me. I am not permitted to disclose the amount of the deal, but I can say I am writing from my new beachfront villa on Maui. I wish you were here.

    Don’t quit doing what you do. You’re smart enough, you’re good enough, and doggone it… well I don’t want to lie, so I’ll stop.

    Just remember, It’s not you, it’s me.

    Bill

    Reply
    • Wendy Lawton

      May 8, 2012 at 9:16 am

      Laughing so hard I need to do eye makeup triage.

      Bill, that one is for patiently waiting writers everywhere!

      Reply
    • sally apokedak

      May 8, 2012 at 9:33 am

      Hysterical.

      Reply
    • Jeanne

      May 8, 2012 at 10:03 am

      I’m just going to say that I’m relieved no one can hear me cackling at your letter. Sooooo happy you caught the Armpit Craze, Bill! 🙂

      Reply
    • Kathryn Elliott

      May 8, 2012 at 10:12 am

      *Diet Coke spit-take*!!! Intern just ran into my office to make sure I was not dying! Thanks for the laugh, Bill!

      Reply
    • Christine Dorman

      May 8, 2012 at 12:21 pm

      Love this! Especially the last line.

      Reply
    • Michelle Lim

      May 8, 2012 at 12:44 pm

      Hilarious, Bill! Love it!

      Reply
    • Cynthia Herron

      May 8, 2012 at 3:00 pm

      Bill, I’ve honestly read your comment two or three times today. This one’s such a keeper. Thanks! I think we can all use this bit of levity today!

      Reply
    • Yvette Carol

      May 8, 2012 at 7:34 pm

      Brilliant! Joyous even 🙂
      Yvette Carol

      Reply
    • Katie Ganshert

      May 9, 2012 at 7:37 am

      One big giant L-O-L!!!

      Reply
    • don Kimrey

      May 9, 2012 at 7:45 am

      Brilliantly witty and clever. You cunningly sarcastic scoundrel!

      Reply
    • Karey

      May 9, 2012 at 7:46 am

      I was considering entering a letter of my own so I could win Wendy’s books, but after reading this, I’m afraid it would be time wasted.

      Thanks for the laugh.

      Reply
    • Laini Giles

      May 9, 2012 at 9:04 am

      Bill, I”m going to have to print thtat one out and hang it on the wall to give me a giggle when I’m pulling my hair out.

      And I’m with Wendy. I need a wetnap. Stat!

      Reply
  7. Cheryl Dale

    May 8, 2012 at 7:55 am

    Wendy – can’t tell you how timely this post was. I needed the chuckle. I just posted my anguish over yet another rejection letter on my blog (www.climbingoutofthevalley.wordpress.com) and your post was the perfect encouragement. Thank you

    Reply
    • Wendy Lawton

      May 8, 2012 at 11:02 am

      It just gives us a different perspective.

      Reply
  8. Lori

    May 8, 2012 at 7:56 am

    Dear Agent,
    Thank you for the time you spent considering my submission. After a reasonable amount of time, I’ve been offer representation from another agent. When you were requesting a partial, this agent was requesting a full manuscript.

    Based on your recommendations of my partial, I will not be changing the format of my novel from a suspense/thriller to a sci-fi paranormal romance or to a non-fiction self-help book for the technically illiterate.

    I know you are one of the leading agents and that you have had a lot of success with many authors, however I don’t think we would be a good fit together. (Especially when you suggested that I should give up my day job to concentrate all of my time on my upcomming book.) I know there are many would be authors who would love an offer of representation by you, however I am not one of them. Best wishes.

    Sincerely,

    Would Be Author

    Reply
    • Wendy Lawton

      May 8, 2012 at 11:04 am

      Isn’t it true that this whole process is so subjective. The “changing the format” part is funny but all too often true.

      Thanks for playing.

      Reply
    • don Kimrey

      May 9, 2012 at 7:42 am

      love it! I could almost hear the air hissing when you pin pricked that inflted ego.

      Reply
  9. Bill Giovannetti

    May 8, 2012 at 8:06 am

    Dear Publisher,

    Please remove The Shack from your consideration. I have decided to go a different route.

    Sincerely,
    William P. Young

    Reply
    • Wendy Lawton

      May 8, 2012 at 11:05 am

      These are the kinds of letters that change the course of an acquisition editor’s lifetime regrets.

      Reply
  10. David Todd

    May 8, 2012 at 8:19 am

    Dear Agent:

    Your lack of response to my query letter, sent by e-mail in [insert year e-mail was sent], long after the time you stated on your website within which you would respond, must be for good reasons. However, the obvious legitimacy of those reasons are clearly not beyond the reach of my limited ability to understand.

    I’ve waited quadruple that time before deciding your agency does not meet my current publishing needs. Therefore, I withdraw my manuscript.

    Regards,
    Author B. Goode

    Reply
    • David Todd

      May 8, 2012 at 8:28 am

      Oops. The second sentence in the first paragraph should have been “…are clearly beyond the reach….”

      Reply
    • Wendy Lawton

      May 8, 2012 at 11:07 am

      *Ouch*

      I think the non-responsiveness part is the hardest to swallow. How I wish we could fix this industry-wide.

      Reply
      • Janet Ann Collins

        May 8, 2012 at 2:26 pm

        Amen to that! Getting rejection letters proves you’re a writer, but getting nothing makes it seem like they think you don’t exist.

  11. Jennifer Major

    May 8, 2012 at 9:16 am

    Dear Mondo Grande Publishing Company
    Attn: President Doorknob

    I have finished reviewing the requested edits on my photographic memoir entitled “El Capitan-One Woman’s Journey In Overcoming Adversity”. While I once had respect and appreciation for your publishing house, I am afraid I can no longer work with you.

    I undertook and organized the highly publicized climb, and subsequent book, to bring awareness to women war veteran’s and their personal struggles with traumatic injuries. I take enormous personal and professional offense at being asked to re-title the book “Look Ma, No Hand”.

    It was only after reading the suggested edits and discussing them by phone, that I became aware that someone in the editorial department gave my book to their teenage daughter for her English Lit class senior project.

    No, I do not believe re-staging the climb with Zac Efron and Justin Bieber would “make it, like, hawt”.

    No, you utter moron, it is NOT “Yo-sah-mite” Park.

    I do believe safety equipment IS important and not there to give me a bad hair day. No, the proper word is not “cramps”, it’s CLAMPS.

    I refuse to blur out the photos taken from below me, no, my butt does not look huge in a climbing harness.

    Please do not consider this letter the final communication on the matter, my attorneys have already filed a lawsuit.

    I recorded the Skype conversation I had with the young lady in question. I believe the word is “viral”.

    You are all fired.

    See you in court,

    Mad Authoress

    Reply
    • Wendy Lawton

      May 8, 2012 at 11:10 am

      Funny, but again *ouch.*

      The celebrity thing does get old, right? And nothing is more frustrating than having a serious book watered down to make it “salable.”

      Reply
      • Jennifer Major

        May 8, 2012 at 11:36 am

        Your comment made me think of “Pride and Prejudice and Zombies”. Poor dear Jane.

    • Laini Giles

      May 9, 2012 at 9:08 am

      Jennifer–

      That letter was awesome-sauce.

      Reply
      • Jennifer Major

        May 9, 2012 at 1:28 pm

        Thanks!

    • Christina

      May 9, 2012 at 5:12 pm

      Now I want to read that book, especially as a climbing chick, albeit with both hands. 🙂

      Reply
  12. Cheryl Malandrinos

    May 8, 2012 at 9:34 am

    These are great. Definitely worth every chuckle. Wendy, thanks for a good laugh too.

    Reply
  13. Jeanne

    May 8, 2012 at 10:05 am

    Okay, after reading current submissions, I’ve decided to sit back and chuckle. :)I’m not as creative as you all are. 🙂

    Wendy, thanks for the fun today!

    Reply
  14. sally apokedak

    May 8, 2012 at 10:26 am

    Dear Ms. Agent,

    Thanks so much for sending me your resume. Please know that I read every resume with careful attention and I’m honored by the trust you show in granting me this opportunity to look at all your warts under a microscope.

    I loved your telephone voice, your professionalism, your many great sales, and the way you’re so highly regarded in the industry. Unfortunately, I don’t know any editors who are wanting to work with agents like you.

    If you give yourself a makeover so you look exactly like Jodi Reamer or Joanna Volpe or Andrea Brown, only different, please feel free to resubmit.

    Best wishes as you continue to search for clients.

    Sincerely,

    Sally Q. Author

    Reply
    • Wendy Lawton

      May 8, 2012 at 11:13 am

      Wouldn’t that be an interesting turnaround. Agents begging for clients. Interesting perspective.

      Reply
  15. Karen Porter

    May 8, 2012 at 11:01 am

    What fun! Thanks Wendy for the laughs!

    Bill – you are a hoot! (as we say in Texas).

    Thanks for the smiles today.

    Reply
  16. Michelle Lim

    May 8, 2012 at 12:37 pm

    Dear Agent,

    It is with great regret that I inform you that I can’t at this time accept your representation. Yes, I understand you have been in the publishing industry since before I was born, but this in and of itself does not qualify you to represent someone of my caliber.

    Perhaps if you brushed up on your agenting skills by attending an agent retreat, learned to read, learned to edit and learned how to get me a $50,000 signing bonus I might reconsider.

    I do understand that speculative chick lit with elements of historical romance are not the rave in today’s market, but I assure you that God has asked me to write this manuscript and not change a thing.

    Part of my decision to reject you as my agent hinges on your lack of experience with Movie Contracts, as I am sure my book will be a blockbuster hit.

    Thank you for holding onto my manuscript long enough for me to realize the folly of my ways, before you accepted it, which of course you would have.
    Sincerely,

    Relieved
    Purse Moms Viral Collection
    http://www.specchiclit.brilliant.com

    Reply
    • Wendy Lawton

      May 8, 2012 at 12:47 pm

      I think I remember your query. Yep, it was offer of letting me get you a movie contract and making the initial contact with Oprah that made my heart flutter.

      Reply
      • Michelle Lim

        May 8, 2012 at 12:49 pm

        I applaud agents for weeding through the “Oh My” entries to get to the good ones that land on my book shelf. Thanks for the fun contest!

    • Christine Dorman

      May 8, 2012 at 12:51 pm

      “This in and of itself does not qualify you to represent someone of my caliber.” Love it! I have to remember that line. Thank you, Michelle.

      Reply
    • Jeanne

      May 8, 2012 at 12:59 pm

      Michelle, you are hilarious. 🙂

      Reply
  17. Christine Dorman

    May 8, 2012 at 12:47 pm

    Dear Publisher and / or Agent:

    Thank you for your interest in my manuscript. After careful consideration, my team and I (read: me, myself and the fluffy stuffed unicorn that I hold while reading form rejection letters) have decided that you do not fit my needs at this time and / or you have not measured up to my standards for some or all of the following reasons:

    > response time too slow
    > no negligible acknowledgement of writer
    as a human being
    > your belief that writers are beggars
    who should be thankful when you
    deign to work with them
    > forgetting that it’s not all about you
    > forgetting that self-publishing is now
    a viable option for writers
    > the colors on your website are ugly
    > Peter Jackson has acquired the rights
    to my manuscript and has promised
    to make it bigger than The Lord of
    the Rings and Harry Potter combined
    > my manuscript is going to auction and
    you’re just too late
    > neither our astrological charts nor our
    Celtic Tree signs are compatible
    > my manuscript has already become a
    New York Times bestseller (sorry
    I was slow in notifying you that
    it was picked up by another pub.

    Best regards in your future publishing endeavors.

    Crab B. Author

    Thank you, Wendy, for this highly creative post! I tried not to be negative in my rejection letter, but I’m afraid some might have crept in. Still, I hope that you enjoy it.

    Everyone has done a great job with this!

    Happy Tuesday! 🙂

    Reply
    • Jennifer Major

      May 8, 2012 at 12:57 pm

      You had me at ugly website colours, made me laugh out loud at Peter Jackson and OWNED it with the astrology/Celtic tree signs!! Hysterical!!!

      Reply
      • Christine Dorman

        May 8, 2012 at 1:38 pm

        Thank you, Jennifer.

        I also enjoyed yours, especially the part about the editorial department giving the manuscript to the teenage daughter for her Senior Lit Project! I really enjoyed this today. It gave new meaning to the phrase, “It’s better to give than to receive.” Blessings!

    • Kathryn Elliott

      May 8, 2012 at 1:12 pm

      Crab B Author…*giggle!*

      Reply
      • Christine Dorman

        May 8, 2012 at 1:39 pm

        Thank you, Kathryn! Glad it gave you a giggle.

    • Wendy Lawton

      May 8, 2012 at 1:38 pm

      Tuesday just got a little happier because of your hilarious post. I used to love those check-the-box rejection letters.

      Reply
      • Christine Dorman

        May 8, 2012 at 1:42 pm

        Thank you, Wendy. In all honesty, I was having a bad day until I read your post. Thank you so much. You and all the rejection writers have made my Tuesday a happy day. 😀

        Blessings!

  18. Kathryn Elliott

    May 8, 2012 at 1:04 pm

    Dear Editor:

    Thank you for your interest in No Commission For You.

    I appreciate your tenacity; the numerous emails, floral deliveries and weepy late night phone messages certainly set your offer apart from the rest. In fact, I forwarded your last email to several of my colleagues at the City Police Department for feedback, but after careful consideration and lengthy criminal records checks, we agree it is in my best interest to sign elsewhere.

    Again, thank you for your interest and I encourage you to keep visiting my blog. Perhaps, with a little professional help, I’ll be able to unblock your comments.

    Sincerely,
    Changing Phone Number

    Reply
    • Michelle Lim

      May 8, 2012 at 1:08 pm

      LOL! Great letter Kathryn!

      Reply
      • Kathryn Elliott

        May 8, 2012 at 1:10 pm

        Thanks – it was a fun break from the Day Job. 🙂

    • Jennifer Major

      May 8, 2012 at 1:24 pm

      Hahahaha!!!

      Reply
    • Wendy Lawton

      May 8, 2012 at 1:42 pm

      Nothing scarier than a writer-stalker especially when they are an agent or an editor. Here’s hoping your success is big enough that some day you WILL receive flowers from a wooing editor.

      Reply
      • Kathryn Elliott

        May 8, 2012 at 2:21 pm

        From your lips to God’s ears! And wooing works for me. 🙂

    • Christine Dorman

      May 8, 2012 at 1:45 pm

      Brilliant! I especially enjoyed the No Commission For You title.

      Reply
  19. Kathy Boyd Fellure

    May 8, 2012 at 1:29 pm

    These are hilarious!
    Bill, I needed to laugh until my sides hurt.

    Thanks for the challenge, Wendy.

    Reply
  20. Michelle Lim

    May 8, 2012 at 2:03 pm

    Dear Agent,

    I understand that you are extremely busy, but I am writing to you regarding a dire situation that cannot wait another eleven months.

    You see, my manuscript is drowning in your slush pile. I have heard that agents are a writer’s lifesaver in this business, so I know you will drop everything to rescue my baby.

    If by chance it should need resuscitation, please note that I give my permission to perform CPR, edit the whole thing, or rewrite as necessary. After all you are the agent, I am merely the creative inspiration for your pen edits.

    I wholeheartedly pledge to you that upon its publication I shall nominated you for Agent Baywatch. Because you will have proved yourself to be among the best lifesavers in the industry.

    Sincerely,

    SOS

    Reply
    • Kathryn Elliott

      May 8, 2012 at 2:09 pm

      Oh my – Agent Baywatch! Hysterical!

      Reply
  21. Kathy Boyd Fellure

    May 8, 2012 at 2:03 pm

    Dear major yet shall remain unnamed publisher,

    How it saddens me to inform you of my new unexpected dilemma.

    I must request the immediate return of the manuscript you’ve relished these past twelve months and held close to your irregular bleating heart. Please use the SASE I originally enclosed.

    Let me surfice to say, I’ve received a promising offer I cannot refuse. A film and book deal has landed cozily in my welcoming lap and it comes with little added perks that this, unknown, first-time novelist simply finds a must accept proposal.

    My faithful and diligent agent agrees this is a wise and needful choice for my future writing career.

    You will soon receive a detailed and polite request from her along these lines.

    I must close with thankful appreciation for your attentive and time consuming consideration this entire past year to my obscure and fascinating novel, on the demise of the publishing industry due to alien invasion of body snatchers in black suits with pet monkeys in yellow exploding turbans.

    Most sincerely,

    Yolonda Harper Philpot
    Author, screenwriter, and zookeeper

    Reply
  22. Sharon K Mayhew

    May 8, 2012 at 2:15 pm

    Oh my goodness! What a fun post and fun comments. 🙂

    Reply
  23. Dale Rogers

    May 8, 2012 at 2:24 pm

    To Whom It May Concern:

    Thank you so much for offering to publish Dream of the Moon. Unfortunately, your company isn’t quite what I’m looking for. Please forgive the imper- sonal nature of this form letter; I no longer have time to make individual responses.

    Don’t take this as a personal rejection. The publishing business is very subjective, and what’s not right for me might be right for someone else.
    I wish you the best in searching for that perfect
    client.

    Sincerely,
    The Best Client that Got Away.

    Reply
  24. Becky Doughty

    May 8, 2012 at 4:15 pm

    Wow. I’ll jump into the fray, although bow to Bill’s superior skill on this one!

    Dear Agent,

    Thank you for your timely response to my query for representation. I appreciate the thoughtful and well-written form rejection letter I received yesterday. Although I was at first disappointed that we would not be working together, upon further review, I discovered that your rejection was, in fact, quite serendipitous.

    Although I clearly stated in my query that I am actively seeking an agent with your precise qualifications, your unique experience, and your smoldering good looks, for the following reasons, I no longer believe that you are a good fit for me and my books. You represent Christian fiction but I write Christian Women’s fiction. Not only are you an agent, but you edit, you blog, you read and review, you garden, you make your own bread, you ride camels, you paint lightning, you raise a family, and you write your own books, a potential conflict of interest, if I’m not mistaken. Unfortunately, your platform is a little too broad and unfocused and I’d prefer to work with an agent who has a keen sense of his or her identity. Being able to do it all doesn’t necessarily benefit you; branding is paramount in this industry, especially now with the changing face of publishing, e-publishing, and self-publishing.

    You obviously have great potential as an agent, however, I encourage you to work on your craft a little more. Tighten up the loose ends and clear any unnecessary distractions off your plate. Hone your skills, center your focus, and spend a little more time creating your distinctive brand.

    Good luck in your future endeavors,
    F. Heather Plume

    Reply
    • Wendy Lawton

      May 8, 2012 at 4:22 pm

      Very interesting to see some of the arguments used against writers flipped around and applied to agents. Touché.

      Reply
    • Jennifer Major

      May 8, 2012 at 5:00 pm

      LOVED this one, but “F. Heather Plume”? Great play on sound and word.

      Reply
  25. Brandi Daniels

    May 8, 2012 at 4:17 pm

    Dear Agent;

    While I appreciate you taking your precious time reading my manuscript, I must inform you that I have had a change of heart. I no longer feel like this agency is the right one for me.

    Just because I decided you are not for me doesn’t mean that someone else won’t want you. I encourage you to continue searching for the perfect client and I wish you all the best on your search.

    Best regards,

    The writer that got away

    Reply
  26. Yvette Carol

    May 8, 2012 at 7:40 pm

    The whole time I was reading this post and the subsequent comments I was busy formulating in my head my own rejection letter. But the further I read the more intimidated I became. These are SO good there isn’t another thing I could add. Well done everyone!!! Needed a good laugh while I shed another useless tear over the three unreceived rejections on my own plate…nope, still no word a year later. At least there’s some consolation in knowing we’re all in this boat together 🙂
    Yvette Carol

    Reply
  27. Wendy Lawton

    May 9, 2012 at 1:36 am

    How does one pick a best of the best? You guys are, in the words of Jennifer Major, “like Hawt.”

    I wish I could just award a prize packet to each of you rejection-meisters, but alas. . .

    I did narrow it down to three top contenders:
    Bill Giovannetti
    Christine Dorman
    Kathryn Elliott

    So if each one of you will send your mailing address to me at wendy[at]booksandsuch.com, I’ll send out a prize packet of some great reads.

    Thank you for giving us all some much needed laughter. You guys are the best. Here’s hoping you’ll all be in the position some day to pick and choose.

    Reply
    • Christine Dorman

      May 9, 2012 at 11:32 am

      Wendy, thank you so much! I’m glad you enjoyed it. The letter was great fun to write. And congratulations to Bill and Kathyrn–and to everyone. I thought everyone did a fantastic job.
      Blessings!

      Reply
    • Bill Giovannetti

      May 9, 2012 at 11:03 pm

      Fun! Done! Thank you.

      Reply
  28. Ann Bracken

    May 9, 2012 at 6:39 am

    Thanks so much for a laughing start to my day! You are all wonderfully creative.

    Reply
  29. nan kilmer

    May 9, 2012 at 7:49 am

    One of my first rejections came several years ago from a highly recommended agent. She wrote that my story was fantastic, hilarious, universal,sassy, etc.– but she was passing on it. I cried a few hours before checking my computer later that night and reading an e mail from same agent: “Nan: I am SO sorry, I confused your work with another author; please send me your fist 2 chapters asap”.
    Confused, for lack of a better adjective, I did not contact the woman again.

    Reply
    • Jennifer Major

      May 9, 2012 at 7:59 am

      That is so unprofessional! Poor you!

      Reply
  30. Denise

    May 9, 2012 at 8:35 am

    Dear Agent,
    I am sorry for the impersonal nature of this form letter. I do appreciate you going into business and standing in the doorway of the major publishing companies protecting the unknowing public of potential books that may not be the trendy thing right now. Heaven forbid a new thought arise that is not quite in sync with the vampire culture of today. I appreciate your restraint from taking a bite into my story and sucking the life blood out of my dreams. Having said that, I must refrain from sending you any more of my work. Please do not take this personal. This is a subjective business and I am sure there are writers out there that will champion your agent skills. At his time my series is doing quite well on Amazon, selling well over 50,000 ebooks in a few short months. I intend to use the extra 20 percent that would have gone to you for those faithful friends who believe in my work and are helping market my wonderful spine chilling yet heartfelt stories across the globe. I wish you the best in acquiring the next unoriginal wannabe of the latest trend.
    Most Sincerely,
    Denise Daisy

    Reply
    • Aimee L. Salter

      May 9, 2012 at 1:42 pm

      LOL.
      Touche!

      Reply
  31. Sue Harrison

    May 9, 2012 at 8:58 am

    Just love that letter, Wendy!

    Reply
  32. Karen L Boncela

    May 9, 2012 at 9:11 am

    Thoroughly enjoyed this topic, left me laughing. Life is too short to be too serious, yeah? And by the way, I’ve had plenty of rejections myself……

    Reply
  33. Linda

    May 9, 2012 at 9:37 am

    Here are two to choose from. I modified the actual rejection letters…

    Dear High-Profile Agent:

    Thanks for your form letter response to my query. Of all the form rejections, I’ve received yours was the most impersonal.

    As to your representation, I’m afraid I must pass — I’m just not enthusiastic enough about your response time or your boilerplate to feel you would be the right agent for my project. I must be highly selective about who represents me. I realize it is difficult to judge your potential from a form rejection; nevertheless please know that I give serious attention to every rejection I receive.

    Sorry I could not give you a more positive reply. Thanks for thinking of me, though, and best of luck in your search for clients.

    Sincerely,

    Best Selling Author of Highly Popular Book Series
    Oscar Winning Script Writer of Movie Trilogy Based on Highly Popular Book Series

    or

    Hi, Author,

    Thank you for your rejection letter. While your agency certainly has merit, I’m just not wild enough about the response time and wish to withdraw my query. As I’m sure you know, it’s important that your client be totally excited by/committed to /passionate about your representation, and I’m sorry to say that didn’t happen here. But, opinions vary considerably in this business, and mine is just one. I’m sure you’ll find others who feel differently. I hope so!
    I wish you the very best in your search for clients.

    Warm regards,

    Reply
  34. Sharon

    May 9, 2012 at 9:42 am

    This is so funny because I recently sent rejection letters to six agents after signing with another. It was so, so much fun to send rejection letters! But when I sat down to write them I felt a little bad. How crazy is that? Three wrote me back right away congratulating me. The others didn’t reply.

    I included letters to two agents who’d had my manuscript for nearly a year. I had given up on them already, but I sent a rejection letter to them anyway…you know, just cause I could.

    For these guys I wish I would have had the nerve to write this:

    Dear Agent X:

    I really enjoyed waiting for nearly a year for you to respond to my query, unfortunately I’ve since realized that I didn’t fall in love with you as much as I needed to to continue waiting. However, I feel very strongly that you will find another writer who will wait around for as long as it takes.

    I wish you best of luck in all your publishing endeavors!

    Sharon

    Reply
    • Wendy Lawton

      May 9, 2012 at 10:02 am

      Congratulations, Sharon.

      You’ve identified one of the things writers probably don’t realize. Writing rejections or passing on projects is the hardest part of our job. We must be realistic about what we can do, but believe me, we follow those writers and though we are always pulling for their success, there’s always a little catch that we let them get away.

      There are successful writers out there I still regret missing out on. (You know who you are. 🙂 )

      Reply
  35. P. J. Casselman

    May 9, 2012 at 11:14 am

    Dear Literary Agent,

    Thanks you for submitting your rejection of my query. As you know, I get hundreds of rejections each year. Unfortunately, yours is just not a good fit for me. Although I normally do not have time to elaborate, I shall make an exception in your case.

    Your rejection was based on what criteria? You stated none, so it leaves me wondering if you actually have any. Was it because I am a man? I am just curious because all your agents are women as are all of your fiction clients. Do men not read SO the book market is slanted to women or do they not read BECAUSE it is? I do understand if this is the reason for your rejection, because I cannot imagine the horror someone would feel when they look at all your authors’ lovely portraits only to see my bearded, butt-ugly face.
    Perhaps the reason was the subject matter? I realize that my work was not another cliche “Little House on the Prairie” book, but is fantasy really not a seller? I suppose all the Harry Potter, Lord of the Rings, Twilight, True Blood, Camelot, Game of Thrones, Grimm, Once Upon a Time, etc. fans are just a fringe group.
    With nothing to go on, I will simply presume your rejection of my query was based on my lack of other books. This makes total sense because if I had other published books that another agent promoted, I would most certainly be querying you now, right? Therefore, your rejection criteria is severely lacking and therefore received a failing grade.
    Obviously, the lack of feedback created a need to assume a reason and we all know what happens when we ass-u-me, right?

    (Tongue is in cheek, so don’t freak out, OK? :D)

    Reply
  36. Tom Honea

    May 9, 2012 at 11:37 am

    you, all of you, have … i am sure read Norman Maclean’s letter to Alfred M Krofp (who choose NOT to publish A River Runs Through It. ) … http://writerunderground.com/2006/12/07/norman-macleans-lost-masterpiece/

    Reply
  37. Jack LaBloom

    May 9, 2012 at 12:03 pm

    Dear Literary Agent:

    My uncle died last week, and I have been informed he left me a considerable sum of money. From what my family and I have been able to determine, without my knowledge, Uncle Luther took two manuscripts I had given him to read and had them published by some outfit in New York. We all thought he was a recluse who never left the house.

    Supposedly, the millions he accumulated came from royalties on those novels. We are trying to figure out the pen name he used, a secret he may have carried to his grave.

    I hope you will not take this the wrong way, but that manuscript you requested from me months ago may be worth millions. Would you mind if I let a few other literary agents have a look at it?

    Sincerely yours,

    Jack LaBloom

    Reply
  38. Amy Leigh Simpson

    May 9, 2012 at 12:22 pm

    I can feel the knot of stress in my chest unraveling with each one of these. Hysterical! Thank you, Wendy, and all you brave participants. You made my day!

    Reply
  39. Aimee L. Salter

    May 9, 2012 at 1:38 pm

    Dear Agent,

    Thank you for taking the time to reject me. After careful consideration of your correspondence, I’m afraid I can’t offer you any consideration at all. You see, someone else saw diamonds where you saw swill.

    Please remember, this is only one author’s opinion. I would encourage you to keep rejecting other writers with impunity. While I am out there earning my way and gaining an audience, it would give me a great deal of satisfaction to think of you toiling away in your little office, still waiting for that One Great Book.

    You already missed it.

    With petty-minded pleasure,

    Aimee L. Salter
    Published Author

    Reply
  40. Marian O'Brien Paul

    May 9, 2012 at 3:31 pm

    Dear Sir or Madam,
    The considerable amount of time you have expended perusing my manuscript submission is an indicator of the dedication you apply to selecting only the most worthy writing to represent. I’m sure you have been enjoying my novel.
    Thus, it grieves me to inform you that I have accepted an offer of representation from another equally dedicated agent who reads a bit more quickly.
    I encourage you to continue your careful search through the submissions you receive. Eventually you will discover someone you will be able to represent.

    Sincerely,

    Marian O’Brien Paul

    Reply
  41. Nigel

    May 9, 2012 at 5:16 pm

    Dear [insert publisher here],

    It is with great dismay that I inform you that I have chosen to do business with another company.

    Despite the multiple copies of my book that have been given to you, for free, it seems as though you are too tight-assed to realize that such an act requires a response. You couldn’t even be bothered to send me a ‘stop sending this, we already have a copy’ note. Seriously?

    I hope that this makes you feel as worthless as those you reject feel when you don’t even bother giving them a ‘why’.

    Sincerely,

    Nigel

    Reply

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